She’s Not Into That

April 18, 2007

Hope and I were in the bedroom. Been a long day, so I’m drinking scotch and lying in bed with the laptop, and reading Naughty Heather’s poem “Soon Enough.”

Hope, in running shorts that show off her creamy legs and make me a little crazy with lust, crawled up on the bed. (When she does that, the words “sex kitten” come to mind with powerful force.) Her blouse, though, was a button-down white shirt. She snuggled up to me, pressing her breasts against my arm and her legs against mine, her mouth sleepy against my neck.

“Whatchya reading, Doc?”

“Naughty Heather.”

“Read it to me.”

So I do. I can feel her grinning into my sleeve.

Her legs shift a little.

“You write better than that,” she says in her light Southern accent. (”You raht bettah than thayat,” it comes out.) Her hand is stroking my chest, unbuttoning my shirt.

“Don’t be…” I start to say. Her hand slips inside my shirt and is playing with my nipples. “Um. You didn’t like it?”

“Didn’t say that,” Hope says, voice barely audible as she kisses my neck.

“You’re not into that spanking stuff.”

“No, but Ah didn’t say that, either,” she drawls. Her tongue is on my earlobe now, gently flicks into my ear and then back down to my neck. “You into that? Wanna spank my hot ass?” Her hand slips into my slacks.

Loud knocking on the door. It’s our oldest daughter. The hand comes out, but my right arm holds her right where she is. The door flies open as I whisper, “You are not going anywhere.”

Our girl has a litany of complaints. We dismiss them one by one until she is out of excuses for hanging around and spoiling mom and dad’s time alone. She hangs around at the foot of the bed, evidently not going anywhere.

“Honey,” says Hope gently.

Our daughter looks up.

Go,” says Hope firmly.

The door clicks shut, and my hand is in between my wife’s thighs, travelling up and down.

“Read me that line again, tiger,” she purrs.

“I need to be covered in your sweat and your tears / and I need my ass to be reddened with your handprints.”

“That good poetry, Lit Doctor?” she asks, her tongue busy now on my nipples.

“Strictly speaking, no. No formal control,” I mutter. “But that’s not the only test of a good poem.”

“What is?” she hums.

My finger dips into the legband of her shorts, into the legband of her panties, and I feel the prickly stubble where she shaves herself, and my middle finger dips into the familiar labia, rubs up one side of one wet lip and down the other, drawing out the nectar. She looks up from my chest, her eyes smoky and unfocused.

“This,” I whisper to her, and bring my finger to my lips, the evidence of her literary tastes salty on my tongue.

JL

5 Responses to “She’s Not Into That”


  1. Hmmm
    Wasn’t sure where you were going with that, but it sounds like it was ummmm, appreciated by the time it was all over with…


  2. Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you…there will NEVER be any formal control in my writing about this particular relationship. Given the subject and the circumstances, it’s just not going to happen.

    There is an old story about a boy taking a gift to someone (Jesus, maybe…) and it was a small gift, and he had to travel a very long way to give it. The receiver thanked him, and he said “The long walk is part of the gift.” Similarly, the lack of normality and formality and the sometimes desperate nature of this relationship are inevitably part of the writing about it.

    But, being a lit doctor, I bet you already knew that! ;)

  3. Jameson Says:

    Yeah, I knew that, Heather-love.

    Writing has different purposes, and expressing yourself is the number one purpose of writing on the Web. It’s emotional journaling or autobiography or something. But welcome. We’re glad you like reading us as much as I enjoy reading you.

  4. Lola Says:

    What a perfect ending; I enjoyed this very much. I’m glad you left a comment so I found your blog!

  5. Virgohippy Says:

    Nice. This happy little scrawl of anticipation earned a chill and a [excised] from me. ;)

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